Personal Essays

1. One idea that the writer gave me was that I need to write something that I feel very strongly for.
2. One thing that I will remember is that I should add as many details as I can because that draws the reader in. 
3. I will use - Don't start every sentence with "I" 
                    - Make connections to specific examples 
                    - Don't rant about your topic 

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